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Enter chaos by ~Unseenoddity:iconUnseenoddity:



I can feel the darkness rising
I can feel the winds of change upon me
The gentle breeze scorching my skin
bringing forth my passion, my rage
I feel death tugging at my thoughts, my heart,
like strings I cannot snap

I see the light fade.
The great becomes the past
Good becomes evil.
Right becomes wrong,
all is new, not as it was.

The red sunset begins.
Blood shall flow in its wake
Heads roll and the mighty die.
The killing fills the ears
The sea turns crimson, as tide matches sunset

Almost black, almost night
The twilight where pain
becomes delight
screams become tears
insane laughter, unbridled minds and diluted souls

Finally, the end comes
The light is gone, like all life
So quietly, so peacefully
No noise, no blood, only solace
Death is here, all else falls silent.
©2006-2008 ~Unseenoddity
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~everlastingindigo:iconeverlastingindigo: Sep 1, 2007, 4:36:48 AM
although i do not see how death is related to chaos... perhaps you'll have to give me your take on it... i highly enjoy the imagery that is put forth inthis piece... i even like it enough to favorite it...

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~Unseenoddity:iconUnseenoddity: Sep 1, 2007, 11:45:11 AM
chaos and disorder are often present when there are large amounts of death and destruction. Its quite often you hear "amids the chaos" or "in the confusion", usually describing gun fights and the like where people are killed, as well as war.

Thank you though, very much so for the favorite, I'm glad you like it.

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*cryingpain:iconcryingpain: Sep 4, 2007, 2:34:10 AM
Wow cool poem I like the flow of it :)

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~Unseenoddity:iconUnseenoddity: Sep 4, 2007, 1:21:12 PM
Thank you!

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~willow09:iconwillow09: Sep 4, 2007, 9:58:56 PM
Feels very epic. I can see this as more of something that could come from an epic war computer game... like maybe War Craft.

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~Unseenoddity:iconUnseenoddity: Sep 5, 2007, 3:27:08 AM
heh, actually its closer to Dawn of War, but still a war computer game ^_^ very good guess.

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~Wolf-Outcast-13:iconWolf-Outcast-13: Mar 31, 2008, 5:11:13 PM
Excellent!!!! And I love how you added Twilight into the mix, that is my favorite time of day!

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~Unseenoddity:iconUnseenoddity: Mar 31, 2008, 7:33:19 PM
Thank ya very much.....and uh...great >_> hahaha

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~Wolf-Outcast-13:iconWolf-Outcast-13: Apr 2, 2008, 11:55:31 AM
^^

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